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Epic Battle :)

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Comission painting of a battle scene.
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

This is the first critique I ever write, so pardon me if is a poor critique.

Composition: Following the rule of thirds, also the golden ratio, I can say is really well done, if I'm not mistaken, you wanted the viewer to watch the whole scene and then focus itself on the argoninan's face, which corses an interesction point of the rule of thirds almost exactly.

Mood and lightning: A gloomy dark mood, you can feel the battle at night and the violence, the colors are very well mixed with the lightning creating the perfect mood for the scene, and all the values of them respect themselves, I really like the monochromatic feeling with the colors to accent the scene.

Technique: The drawing and shapes are well done, you can easily understand what is happening, and the speed painting base style is clearly seen, a little retouched to make the painting cleaner and with more detail, in good balance with the overall mood. Perhaps a little more detail on the characters could be an area of improvement aswell

And to end the criquite, I can say, the only thing I could point out as an aerea of improvement, could be the perspective. There is nothing wrong with this one, but as it a fightning scene, it could look more "dramatic". I really like the change of perspective with the gargoyle and the jumping guy as they are in a higher plane. To me, perspective is the hardest thing to master above all esle.

Awesome and impressive work overall.